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The roofs here are
Made of tin and
Painted a terracotta red.
Dried blood stains that
Even the rain won't
Wash away.

The pink and yellow roses
In the garden
Are drowning, but I
Am flourishing.

There's a man with a
Red windbreaker, running, running
Against the wind and the rain.
Through the curtain of
Slate water, I can see him
And I wonder if he knows
I have captured him, pinned him
On this page.
I wonder if he knows that
Somewhere, someone has written
A poem for him.

I reach out one
Tentative foot so that I may
Feel the drops but not get
My brand-new jeans sopping
Wet.

The ink from the happy face
I drew on my heel with a
Fountain pen
Washes away down the gutter
With the last of the
Apple autumn leaves.

And I can hear the rain on these
Red tin roofs that
Doesn’t pitter-patter but
Crashes
Down on our heads.

The tabby cat blurs by
A streaking arrow of grey
Wet and wailing
Waiting to go
Inside.
©2007-2009 ~Striped-Candycane
:iconstriped-candycane:

Author's Comments

Written spontaneously while it was raining. To preserve my train of thoughts, I edited it as little as possible.

To the man in the red windbreaker.

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The part with the man in the red windbreaker made me stop and kind of gape for awhile at the profoundness. This poem was just... guh... no words. =)

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what a wonder is sleep without dreams
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Agreed. Wonderful work. :)
:iconstriped-candycane:
I'm always watching people who don't know that they're being watched, that they're being thought about, remembered...I just decided to put one of those people in a poem.

--
"Do cats eat bats?[...]Do bats eat cats?"

- Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, by Lewis Carroll

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